Finnar Mind Magic
- patbcs
- Jul 10, 2025
- 12 min read

The relentless Florida sun beat down, a blazing eye in the sky. For Henry, Ben, and Judy, three friends on the precipice of teenagehood, it meant one thing: another day of attempting to skip flat Gulf stones across the shimmering water. The air was heavy and still, thick with the scent of salt and sun-baked sand, a typical summer afternoon.
Henry, the quietest of the trio, squinted at the horizon, waiting for the perfect ripple. Ben, all boundless energy, had already launched a dozen stones, giggling as they plinked into the water. Judy, the most observant, was sketching a lone ibis on a piece of driftwood with a stick, humming a tuneless melody.
Suddenly, the world twisted.
It wasn't a typical squall, no distant rumble of thunder or darkening clouds. Instead, an abrupt, localized micro-burst erupted without warning. It was a sudden vortex of wind, impossibly fast and concentrated, that ripped through the canopy of the mangroves with an unnatural shriek. Leaves tore free, sand blasted their faces, and the calm Gulf water churned to a furious, frothing foam. It lasted mere seconds, a concentrated explosion of air, then dissipated as abruptly as it began, leaving behind a strange, unsettling stillness.
The silence that followed was deeper than before, the air thick with the smell of damp earth and something else, something subtly sweet and metallic, like rain on ancient iron. The friends coughed, wiping sand from their eyes.
“Whoa!” Ben gasped, his usually boisterous voice surprisingly hushed. “What was that?”
Judy, dropping her stick, pointed. “Look!”
Scattered across the damp sand where the swirling wind had touched down were objects unlike anything they’d ever seen. Smooth and dark, they weren’t dull like ordinary beach stones. Instead, they were iridescent, shimmering with faint, internal light, like captured starlight or nebulae swirling in miniature. They pulsed with a gentle, almost imperceptible glow.
Henry, ever the cautious one, knelt. He reached out a hesitant finger and touched one. It was cool, smooth, and vibrated with a faint hum against his skin. A strange tingle spread up his arm, not unpleasant, but utterly foreign.
“It’s… warm,” he murmured, surprised.
Judy picked one up. “And it’s beautiful! Like tiny, trapped galaxies.”
Ben, naturally, grabbed two. “Can we skip these?” he asked, a twinkle in his eye.
As soon as he spoke, the air around the pebbles seemed to shimmer. The faint, sweet metallic scent intensified, and the iridescent glow pulsed brighter.
Then, the world shifted again.
It wasn't physical, not like the micro-burst. It was a sensation, a gentle tugging at the very core of their being, like a string being pulled, not by force, but by invitation. Their vision blurred, colours bleeding into light, and the familiar sounds of the Gulf faded into a distant echo.
They felt… lighter. As if they were no longer bound by gravity, no longer constrained by their own bodies. Panic flickered, but it was quickly replaced by an overwhelming sense of wonder. They looked down, and saw their own bodies, sprawled on the sand, strangely inert.
“Are we… ghosts?” Ben whispered, his spectral voice a mere wisp.
A shimmering outline, like heat haze over a desert, coalesced before them. It wasn't distinctly human, but more like a fluid, flowing shape, radiating a gentle, ancient light. A voice, not heard with their ears but felt directly in their minds, resonated through their spirit-selves.
“Not ghosts, dear children. You are merely… untethered. For a time. We are the Finnar. And you have found our stones of passage.”
The voice was soothing, like the murmur of the sea, yet ancient and full of power. Henry, Ben, and Judy stared, their non-existent mouths agape.
“The micro-burst was an anomaly, a rare tear in the veil between worlds. Our pebbles, scattered, acted as anchors, drawing your burgeoning awareness, your spirit-selves, into our realm. A happy accident, perhaps, as the currents of time and space are strong here.”
“Finnar?” Judy thought, her question clear in the shared mental space. “What are you?”
“We are weavers,” the Finnar presence rippled. “Weavers of boats that travel not through water, but through the very fabric of time and space. We do this with our minds, with out-of-body magic, like yours is now. We travel without truly leaving where we are, observing, learning, understanding the ebb and flow of all things. We can even, at times, see the whispers of the future.”
“Boats?” Ben projected, already excited. “Like, proper boats?”
“Vessels of consciousness, yes,” the Finnar elaborated, a sense of amusement rippling through its presence. “And you, with our guiding light, are now within one. A small, temporary craft woven from the threads of your own curiosity. You sought the unknown, and it has found you.”
The Finnar seemed to focus its attention on the pebbles, which still glowed faintly on the sand where their bodies lay. “These stones,” it conveyed, “are fragments of our own essence, imbued with the energy of our travels. They are also drawn to silver, a metal that amplifies our connection.”
Suddenly, the shimmering outline of the Finnar pulsed, and the world around them shifted. The Gulf Coast, their bodies, the entire present day, dissolved like smoke. They were no longer floating above Florida, but soaring through a swirling tunnel of colours, light, and faint echoes of sounds. It was exhilarating, like falling upwards through a dream.
“Whoa!” Ben exclaimed, his ethereal form spinning with delight.
“Observe,” the Finnar’s voice resonated, and the tunnel solidified.
They found themselves hovering high above a rugged coastline, windswept and wild. Below, a small settlement nestled beside a deep fjord. Longhouses, built of sturdy timber, stood clustered together, their roofs thatched with sod. The air was crisp, pungent with the smell of woodsmoke and roasting meat.
They could see people moving about: men with braided beards and leather tunics, women with long skirts and colourful brooches, children playing with wooden toys. Longboats, sleek and fearsome, with carved dragon heads on their prows, were pulled up onto the shore, their sails furled.
“Vikings!” Henry breathed, his spirit tingling with awe. He’d read about them in history books, but to see them…
They drifted lower, close enough to discern individual faces, the patterns on their clothing. A group of men were hammering metal at a forge, the clang of hammer on anvil echoing through the settlement. Children raced past, shouting in a language they couldn’t understand, but their joy was clear. Near one longhouse, a woman was weaving at a loom, her fingers deft and quick.
“This is a Viking settlement, many hundreds of years ago,” the Finnar explained. “A time of daring exploration, fierce loyalty, and deep connection to the land and sea. Observe their daily lives, the strength of their community, the simple beauty of their existence before the complexities of larger empires.”
They watched a feast being prepared. A huge bonfire crackled in the center of the village, and spits of meat turned slowly over the flames. Laughter and boisterous shouts filled the air. A bard, or perhaps a skald, began to play a lyre, and a deep, resonant song carried on the wind.
Judy felt a strange ache, a longing to join them, to feel the warmth of the fire, to taste the roasted meat. But she knew she couldn’t. They were observers, invisible and untouchable. It was like watching a perfectly real movie, but knowing you couldn't be a part of it.
After what felt like a long, captivating hour, the Finnar’s voice gently returned. “There is more to see, young ones. More threads in the tapestry of time.”
The Viking village blurred, dissolved into the swirling vortex of light and colour once more. The sensation of soaring returned, even more powerful this time, as if they were hurtling through space itself, not just time.
When the colours solidified again, they were no longer above a rugged, cold land, but suspended high above a sprawling, sun-baked city in a vast, arid desert. The air was hot, dry, and carried the faint scent of spices and dust.
Below them stretched an incredible panorama. Massive, stepped towers, ziggurats, rose majestically towards the sky, built of countless sun-baked bricks. One, particularly grand, seemed to shimmer with gold and lapis lazuli in the distance. Intricate gardens, lush and green, appeared to cascade down the sides of other structures, defying the harsh desert climate.
“Babylon!” Henry whispered, his spirit practically vibrating with excitement. He knew this from his history books too – the Hanging Gardens, the great city walls.
“Indeed, the heart of the Babylonian Empire, millennia ago,” the Finnar confirmed. “A civilization of unparalleled innovation, learning, and architectural marvels. Observe the order, the advancements, the sheer scale of their ambition.”
They drifted lower, into the bustling streets. The city was a hive of activity. Merchants haggled in lively markets, their voices a continuous hum. Artisans meticulously crafted pottery, jewelry, and textiles. Scribes sat cross-legged, etching symbols onto clay tablets, their faces intense with concentration. Soldiers, clad in bronze armor, patrolled the wide avenues.
They saw people drawing water from wells, their robes flowing gracefully. Children chased each other through narrow alleyways, their laughter echoing off the brick walls. They observed a procession, perhaps for a deity or a king, with colourful banners and musicians playing strange, beautiful instruments. The sheer number of people, their diverse clothes, the vibrant energy of the city, was overwhelming.
Judy was fascinated by the patterns carved into the walls of buildings, the intricate details on the garments of the wealthy. Ben was mesmerized by the sheer size of the ziggurats, trying to imagine how they could have been built. Henry, ever the thoughtful one, tried to absorb every detail, knowing this was a glimpse into a world long gone, a testament to human ingenuity.
“The past holds countless lessons,” the Finnar’s voice resonated. “About strength, about beauty, about the relentless march of time. You see how different, yet how similar, people can be across the ages. The human spirit, in its essence, remains constant.”
They watched for a long time, the sun arcing slowly across the ancient sky, casting long shadows across the monumental city. They saw the end of the day, lamps being lit, the city growing quiet, save for the distant murmur of life.
“Your journey approaches its close for now,” the Finnar’s presence began to fade, becoming less distinct. “The threads of your own time tug at you, pulling you back to your anchors.”
The Babylonian city wavered, shimmered, and then dissolved into the familiar tunnel of swirling light and colour. This time, the sensation was of being gently reeled in, like a kite string being pulled. The colours resolved into the familiar blue of the Florida sky, the green of the mangroves, the sparkling surface of the Gulf.
With a soft, almost imperceptible jolt, they were back.
Their eyes blinked open, a little disoriented. The sun still beat down, fierce and hot. The gentle lapping of the waves sounded impossibly loud after the silence of spectral travel. They were lying on the sand, exactly where they had been.
The iridescent pebbles, now a neat cluster, shimmered with an inner light, a silent testament to the impossible. The sweet, metallic scent, subtly different from anything in their familiar world, still hung in the balmy Florida air. It was a fragrance of ancient dust, of sea-salt and woodsmoke, of something utterly alien and yet thrillingly close.
Henry, still slightly light-headed, pushed himself up fully, feeling the gritty sand against his palms. The sun, which had felt so pleasant moments ago, now seemed almost aggressive, as if trying to shock them back into a mundane reality. But there was no going back. The images, sounds, and sensations of a Viking longhouse and a bustling Babylonian market were irrevocably etched into their minds.
“It wasn’t a dream,” Judy said, her voice barely a whisper, as if speaking too loudly might shatter the fragile connection to what they’d experienced. She traced the cool curve of one of the pebbles with her fingertip. “It felt… more real than real. The smell of the spices in Babylon, the cold wind in the Viking village” She shivered, despite the heat.
Ben, ever the most outwardly energetic, bounced on the balls of his feet. “And the ziggurats! Did you see the gold on that big one? And the soldiers! They looked like something straight out of a movie, but, like, actually real.” His eyes, wide with a mixture of childlike wonder and a newly sparked hunger for adventure, darted between his friends and the glowing stones. “But how? How did we… go there? And how did we come back?”
Henry picked up the entire cluster of pebbles. They felt warm now, throbbing faintly in his palm. “The Finnar said,” he began, his voice still a little hoarse, “that they travel ‘without leaving their bodies.’ He said these stones were theirs. And that’s how we could, too. It’s some kind of… mental projection, or consciousness travel.” He paused, trying to make sense of the profound implications. “He also said they were ‘fond of silver’.”
Ben’s eyebrows shot up. “Fond of silver! I remember that! What if that’s how we, like, activate them? Or get them to take us somewhere else?” He leaned in, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper. “What if we kept them safe? What if they could take us on another adventure?”
The pebbles pulsed again, almost imperceptibly, as if in agreement. It was enough.
A wave of shared understanding, unspoken but profound, passed between the three children. This wasn’t just a strange beach find anymore. This was a doorway, a secret passage to all of history, all of time. The weight of that knowledge settled upon them, heavy and exhilarating.
“We can’t tell anyone,” Judy said, her eyes fixed on Henry’s, a rare seriousness in her usually playful gaze. “Not Mom, not Dad, not even Mark from next door. No one would ever believe us.”
Henry nodded slowly, clutching the pebbles tighter. “She’s right. They’d think we’d had too much sun, or worse.” A flicker of concern crossed his face. “We need to hide these. Somewhere safe. Somewhere only we know.”
Ben, usually impulsive, looked surprisingly thoughtful. “My old toolbox in the shed? Nobody ever goes in there. And it locks.”
“Perfect,” Henry agreed, already making a mental inventory of how to get the pebbles from the beach back to Ben’s house unnoticed. The sun was beginning its slow descent towards the Gulf horizon, casting long, golden shadows across the sand. The beach, once a familiar expanse of sand and sea, now felt like the threshold of worlds.
They gathered their towels and their meager beach gear, their movements slow and deliberate, as if fearful of disturbing the delicate balance of their newfound secret. As they walked away from the water’s edge, leaving only their footprints behind, the sounds of the gulls and the distant drone of a boat seemed muted, distant. The world had shifted on its axis, becoming both smaller and infinitely larger all at once.
The walk back to Ben’s house, where they had planned to spend the afternoon, was filled with a hushed tension. Their usual boisterous chatter was replaced by quiet, knowing glances. Henry kept the pebbles tucked deep in his pocket, their faint warmth a constant reminder. Judy kept glancing back at the shimmering Gulf, as if expecting the horizon to ripple and reveal another ancient world. Ben, usually prone to sprinting ahead, walked steadily beside them, his mind clearly racing with possibilities.
Once safely inside Ben’s backyard, they made their way to the small, weather-beaten shed nestled amongst the overgrown oleander bushes. The padlock was rusty, but the key, retrieved from a forgotten hook inside the garage, still worked. The shed was dusty, filled with old lawnmowers, paint cans, and various rusted tools. Ben unearthed a metal tackle box from beneath a pile of old newspapers. It was sturdy, with a working clasp.
Henry carefully placed the glowing pebbles inside. As they settled, the faint hum they emitted seemed to deepen, a quiet, resonant thrum against the metal. It was a sound only they could hear, a vibration only they could feel. Ben snapped the lid shut, then secured the padlock. The secret was contained, for now.
Over the next few days, their lives, on the surface, returned to their usual rhythm. They went to school, did their homework, played video games, and walked the familiar streets of their quiet coastal town. But everything was subtly different. The mundane felt dull, the ordinary, almost unbearable.
Henry, always a diligent student, found his history classes taking on an entirely new dimension. Dates and names in textbooks were no longer just abstract facts; they were echoes of places he had seen, people he had almost touched. He’d stare at illustrations of ancient architecture, remembering the vertigo of looking down on the colossal ziggurats, the intricate patterns of Babylonian garments. He started sketching furiously in a secret notebook, trying to capture the forgotten faces and vibrant markets from memory.
Judy, with her artistic eye, found herself meticulously observing patterns in everyday objects – the weave of a basket, the swirling grain of wood, the delicate tracery of leaves. She saw the world with a newfound depth, inspired by the ornate carvings and rich tapestries of forgotten eras. She began experimenting with clay, though her attempts to recreate the detailed pottery she’d seen in Babylon were clumsy, they fueled a passion she hadn’t known she possessed.
Ben, however, was the most restless. The thrill of discovery had ignited a spark that ordinary life couldn’t extinguish. He spent hours researching, not just on the obscure corners of the internet, but in the musty archives of the local library, poring over books on ancient civilizations, forgotten languages, and lost cities. He began to see every map as a potential gateway, every historical account as an unfinished story they might yet complete. His usual boisterous energy was now channeled into a simmering anticipation, a quiet yearning for the next impossible journey.
They met almost daily, usually at Ben’s house, making excuses to their parents. They’d congregate in the shed, not opening the tackle box every time, but just being near it, whispering about what they had seen, what they had learned, and most importantly, what might come next. The metallic tang, though faint, seemed to linger around the shed, a ghost of memory, a promise of wonders to come.
The Finnar’s parting words echoed in Henry’s mind: “The past holds countless lessons… The human spirit, in its essence, remains constant.” He understood now. They hadn’t just witnessed history; they had felt its pulse, its enduring spirit. And the pebbles, nestled securely in the tackle box, were more than just magical artifacts. They were a bridge, a conduit between their present selves and the infinity of time, waiting for the precise moment when the threads of their own curiosity would tug hard enough to unravel another segment of the universe. The Gulf Coast, with its familiar tides and relentless sunshine, felt like a temporary harbor. They knew, with a certainty that thrilled and terrified them in equal measure, that their greatest adventures had only just begun.



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